« previous next »
Pages: [1]

Author Topic: Daughter - Oakland County 4H Fair  (Read 7674 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline dmd7765

  • MOC Member
  • *
  • Posts: 75
  • First Name (Displayed): Dave
Daughter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« on: July 15, 2013, 09:02:08 AM »
Very Proud Dad Here-

Yesterday I went to see my Daughter (17) ride (Horses) in the Oakland County 4H Fair.  She always enters thing in the different exhibits.  One of the areas was the creative writing competition.  Her Entry was a pro gun paper.  She researched on her own, did not tell me in advance or ask for any advice.

« Last Edit: July 15, 2013, 05:32:40 PM by TheQ »
Logged
molon labe!!
MOC Member
MGO Member

Offline detroit_fan

  • AmmoDump
  • *
  • Posts: 249
  • 2 chairs, no waiting
  • First Name (Displayed): Jason
Re: Duaghter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2013, 12:09:15 PM »
very cool! you should be proud  ;)
Logged

Offline bigt8261

  • MOC President
  • MOC Board Member
  • ******
  • Posts: 1482
    • Michigan Open Carry, Inc
  • First Name (Displayed): Tom
Re: Duaghter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2013, 12:59:59 PM »
+1

How did it turn out?
Logged

Offline dmd7765

  • MOC Member
  • *
  • Posts: 75
  • First Name (Displayed): Dave
Duaghter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« Reply #3 on: July 15, 2013, 01:33:34 PM »
Unfortunately she did not win any placement for the paper
Logged
molon labe!!
MOC Member
MGO Member

Offline Jeff

  • Posts: 1166
Re: Duaghter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« Reply #4 on: July 15, 2013, 04:20:56 PM »
Quote from: dmd7765 on July 15, 2013, 01:33:34 PM
Unfortunately she did not win any placement for the paper

Had it been an Anti-gun paper, Obama would have invited her to the White House to read it on TV.
Logged

Offline part deux

  • MOC Member
  • *
  • Posts: 683
Re: Duaghter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« Reply #5 on: July 15, 2013, 04:58:23 PM »
Congrats dad!

Post it so we can give her the ribbon she deserves!
Logged

Offline dmd7765

  • MOC Member
  • *
  • Posts: 75
  • First Name (Displayed): Dave
Re: Daughter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« Reply #6 on: July 19, 2013, 08:33:11 AM »
Here it is...
Logged
molon labe!!
MOC Member
MGO Member

Offline part deux

  • MOC Member
  • *
  • Posts: 683
Re: Daughter - Oakland County 4H Fair
« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2013, 05:52:27 PM »
Awesome well written!

If she decides to expand on her paper in the future, she may want to consider going into how gun control was historically designed to prevent Negroes from owning firearms.

The college paper side of me is coming out wanting to see APA formatting, which would have a distinctive conclusion paragraph and additional reference sources.

She did good Dad!
Logged
Pages: [1]
« previous next »