Our system of law needs some serious tweaking

[jgillmanjr]

http://www.rrfaae.com/wp/admin/2013/09/our-system-of-law-needs-some-serious-tweaking/

I wrote this a couple of weeks ago. Not my cleanest piece by any means, but it came as a result of me wanting to get my thoughts into words before losing them.

Thoughts?

[bigt8261]

I think it's long. 

[part deux]

Now to be clear, for the purpose of this article, when I say the law should be logical, I'm not referring to the individual laws themselves, but rather the system in general.

System of law, not the specific laws, should be logical.

I believe it's the same meaning, but with far fewer words, and a bit more direct.